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AYTNTD Update

OK, so I know there are lots of people out there ready to hunt me down. You’ve turned in your submission for the AYTNTD and have been waiting patiently by your computer wondering, “Did Kaiser read it? Why haven’t we heard anything? Has he been abducted and brainwashed? Assassinated by the CIA?” Well, the answers my friends are yes, because, no (I don’t think, but how would I really know?), and not yet.

Believe it or not, I am just now finishing up the last of the submissions this week. It’s taken me almost two months to get through them since I decided to read them all personally. Originally, my plan was to solicit the help of some colleagues and spread the work around. That felt too Wal-Mart-ish to me. You deserve better so I have read each one. Every. Word. And there are a lot of them, which is impressive. Impressive on your count, not that I read them. It’s exciting to see so many writers who are developing their craft patiently and consistently. I feel honored that you were willing to share your work with me. Seriously.

Where to from here? Well, I’m going to post the results on Monday. I know, I know—more waiting? It’ll be worth it. There isn’t time or space to give detailed feedback on individual submissions, but there are several comments I can make that apply across the board. I’ll outline the hits and misses that I came across and share how to tighten up your submission and focus your writing a bit more. Fair enough?

So, keep an eye out on Monday.Oh, and to the guy who put up a tent in the woods behind my house (yeah I’m talking to you). You can go home now. Even if your manuscript was awesome I just can’t represent a stalker in good conscience. It’s just–weird. Besides, I think my neighbor’s considering shooting at you.

Wanna be an expert?

The Inevitable Story

Thanks to PBS, I’ve changed my mind on the whole “do I outline a story before I start writing it or do I just start writing and let it happen” argument.

I ran across a really fascinating piece on the Documentary Channel recently on industrial design titled “Objectified”. It’s a piece that the filmmakers describes as a look at…”

“…our complex relationship with manufactured objects and, by extension, the people who design them. It’s a look at the creativity at work behind everything from toothbrushes to tech gadgets. It’s about the designers who re-examine, re-evaluate and re-invent our manufactured environment on a daily basis. It’s about personal expression, identity, consumerism, and sustainability.”

It was really quite good, especially the interview with Jonathan Ive, Apple’s head designer who brought them into the company’s design lab. Something he said has stuck with me this week. He was talking about the iPhone and how the design team’s aim was to create something that was so well designed and intuitive that it felt inevitable, undesigned, something people would hold in their hand and say, “Well, of course that’s the way it should have been designed. Why would you do it any other way?”

His comments especially set me thinking about the implications of design for storytelling, because it certainly exists in that world, too. Just like furniture, computers, and music, stories are designed. They are thought through, worked out, and produced (for lack of a better word) with an end “user” in mind.

Ever finished a book and thought, “I totally could have written that story” because the author made it look…easy? Or, have you ever been swept away by a story’s characters, pace, and suspense to the point that it felt real? Maybe more so than your own life. Both of those are examples of design executed well enough that you don’t notice the design or the designer at work behind the scenes.

I had a long conversation about this with Ted Dekker recently and he echoed what I was thinking. The best stories are the ones seem to unfold effortlessly as if, like Jonathan Ives said, feel “inevitable”. They are the ones that make you say, “Of course that’s the way it would’ve ended” (even if the twist shocked you).

But, make no mistake about it. Pulling this off is something of a small miracle each time it happens. As I thought about it, I scratched down some notes. Maybe these will help clarify the picture a bit more.

How do you create an “inevitable story”?

Let the story settle then emerge on its own. Most stories gestate over the course of years as writers dream, think about, and piece seemingly unconnected scenes together in their mind. At some point, it feels right to begin. The story feels ready to come out. I have a friend right now who just hit that point with a novel he’s beginning. Don’t rush it.

Give it bones. Framework is important. Humans aren’t just muscle, neither are we just bone, spirit or soul. We’re all of it, but without our framework, our bones, we don’t get around very well. Same goes for stories. They all need structure and that means laying it out. Call it outlining, if you want, or whatever. Either way, it’s essential.

Give it time. This is where most people quit because the process is brutal and wrought with banging your head against the wall, coming up with new ideas, scrapping the ideas, starting over. Again and again and again. But that’s part of the deal. If you have 15 minutes, check out this Wired article about the making of the iPhone. It’s an interesting look at what it takes.

Are You the Next Ted Dekker? Let’s Find out.

At 12:01 a.m. CT tonight, I’m opening up my inbox so you can submit your novel proposals for consideration. My hope is that, somewhere among the many submissions that I’m expecting, I’ll find a talented novelist ready to go the next step. There’s no guarantee, of course, that that will happen. Being ready is really in your hands, not mine.

So, let’s get started on how this will work.
I will only consider, submissions that meet the following criteria:

  • Full length, adult works of Fiction. That means novels with a word count of 80,000+ No short stories, short story collections, anthologies, young adult novels, screenplays, or blog entries stapled together and delivered in a Trapper Keeper will be considered. I am not interested in non-fiction works at this time, so please no business, self-help, 7 Steps to (fill in the blank), spirituality books, etc.. They will not be considered. Your novel does not have to be currently finished, but you must commit to completing it within 90 days if you are chosen.
  • Works that can be published as Suspense or Thriller. I am not interested in children’s books, romance tales, or Amish stories (especially Amish romance). Other than those limitations, you may mix genre as long as your story has strong suspense elements. Remember, I’m looking for the next Thriller writer.
  • Works that have not been previously published. Goes without saying, but I’m just saying.

If you were able to check all three boxes then continue reading. If you were NOT able to check all three, you stand at a fork in the road. You can either change your plan or wait until next time to see if you’re what I’m looking for, but please do not try to slip through with something that I don’t want. It’ll only make me grumpy.

For those who are on to the next step, here’s the “what I want and how I want it” part. Please read this next section very carefully. Continue Reading…

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