Comments on: Flash Fiction | The Gamble

By: Kris St. James

Kris St. James — Mon, 28 Sep 2009 14:46:33 +0000

Very good! Not only do I love Flash Fiction, but also collaborative works like this. Hopefully I’ll catch your next contest as a participant.

By: Frank Redman

Frank Redman — Sun, 27 Sep 2009 23:31:59 +0000

Nice work, guys! Full of tension and you immediately feel for Lauren and then her son Joel. What a neat exercise.

By: Mary

Mary — Sat, 26 Sep 2009 15:56:39 +0000

Very good! The story turned out great. I am thinking that this may be the beginning…of something more? It was a great idea, practice, and exercise for writers. Thanks for all you do!

By: Robert Treskillard

Robert Treskillard — Sat, 26 Sep 2009 12:05:04 +0000

Maybe this should have been called “Edge of the Seat”, not only for the main character’s situation, but for where it leaves the reader.

Great writing.